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Compare two questions. One says describe how the speaker's attitude changes. The other says evaluate how convincingly it changes. Same topic. What is the difference?
Describe means say what happens: he goes from detached to sympathetic.
And evaluate means judge it, so I would say whether the change is believable and give reasons.
Exactly. What reasons could you give for a convincing change?
It happens slowly, as he keeps seeing the weddings at one station after another.
And his early superiority makes the later sympathy feel like a real journey.
Good. Notice that you cannot answer well until you have read the command word.
You have three minutes. What is the closing image of the poem and what does it suggest?
A volley of arrows that vanishes from view and comes down as rain.
That is the image. Now the second half of the question.
It suggests release and renewal, because rain brings growth, but also risk, because arrows cannot be called back.
Two points, one sentence each, with the stanza number. That is a complete short answer.
So I should not retell the whole journey?
No. Answer the question you were asked, and stop.
Swap your long answers with a partner and tick four things: command word, evidence, effect and shift.
Mine names the stanzas, but I have only said what the images are, not what they do.
Mine explains the effects, but I forgot to mention that the speaker's attitude changes.
Those are the two commonest gaps. Add a sentence on effect in each paragraph and a sentence on the shift in your conclusion.
Should I add quotations from memory too?
Only if you are sure of the exact words. A stanza number and a precise description are safer than a half-remembered line.
poet, setting, speaker, event, form, structure, tone, themes and key images, ready to recall at once.
state, describe, explain, discuss and evaluate each ask for something different, so read them first.
build every answer paragraph this way, and always say what a feature does.
point to the poem by stanza and line number and describe images accurately instead of risking a misquotation.
give a short answer one or two sentences, a paragraph answer a developed point, and a long answer an argument with a plan.
mark your own work against command word, evidence, effect, shift and conclusion, and then practise the points you missed.
A short answer: asked what the closing image is and what it suggests, write that in stanza 8 a feeling of coming down is compared to a volley of arrows that vanishes from view and lands as rain, and that this suggests release and renewal with an element of risk.
A stanza-based answer on stanza 7 (lines 61–70): the couples share the same journey and the same hour but are absorbed in themselves and unaware of one another, and the poem's quiet, thoughtful tone makes this shared moment feel tender and a little wondering.
A long-answer opening on the speaker's changing attitude: the speaker begins as a detached traveller whose tone is relaxed and faintly ironic, becomes an amused and slightly superior observer of the wedding parties, softens into sympathy for the couples and finally rises to a lyrical and guarded hope, and the poem is convincing because the change is gradual.
A self-marking comment: this paragraph names stanzas 3 and 4 and describes the comic detail of the families, so its evidence is good, but it never says what the detail achieves, so I will add a sentence linking it to the speaker's superior tone.
Read it, plan it, say it, check it, and you will rarely wreck it.
Picture an examination as a station platform. The command word is the signal that tells your answer which train to board. Your plan is the ticket, your points are the carriages, and your conclusion is the arrival at the terminus. Miss the signal and you board the wrong train, however good your ticket is.
Read, Plan, Answer, Check, or RPAC, the four moves of every answer.
C.A.R.E. - Command word, Argument, References by stanza, Effect: take care of these four in every paragraph
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What does the command word explain ask for?
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What does the command word evaluate ask for?
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What does point, evidence, effect mean?
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Which lines make up stanza 7?
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What should you do if you cannot recall an exact line?
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What are the four steps of a good answer?
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The word in a question that tells you what to do, such as state, describe, explain, discuss or evaluate.
A group of lines forming a unit of a poem; this poem has eight stanzas of ten lines each.
A pointer to a place in the poem by line number or stanza, for example lines 71–80 for stanza 8.
Putting the meaning of a passage into your own words without losing its sense.
The specific stanza, image or feature of the poem that supports a point.
What a feature of the poem does to the reader or adds to its meaning; the answer to the question so what.
The central claim of an answer, which every paragraph then supports.
A change of tone, focus or attitude inside a poem; here the speaker's attitude shifts from detachment to sympathy.
This is a practice-centred lesson on “The Whitsun Weddings”. It gives you a one-page recall sheet, shows how to read question types and command words, and works through a bank of short, stanza-based and long questions with model answer points.
Knowing Larkin's poem is not the same as answering questions on it well. This lesson builds the habits that turn knowledge into marks. You begin with a sixty-second sheet of the facts you must have at your fingertips, then learn to read command words, to plan an answer and to use point, evidence and effect. You then work through three banks of questions on the poem: short answers, stanza-focused questions that point you to line numbers in your textbook, and long answers with outlines. The lesson ends with the commonest mistakes and a five-day revision routine you can follow before an examination.
This lesson is built around practice. You already know what happens in “The Whitsun Weddings”, how its tone changes and how it can be appreciated critically. Here you learn to turn that knowledge into clear, well-aimed answers. Each section gives you something to use: a recall sheet, a method, three banks of questions with model points, a list of mistakes and a revision plan. Nothing here asks you to reproduce lines from memory. Every question points to the poem by stanza and line number, and every model answer describes the poem in its own words.
Be able to write this from memory before you attempt any question.
Try each question in your head, then compare your answer with the model points.
For each, read the stanza or stanzas named in your textbook before you answer.
Check the marks and word limits of your own paper, and adjust the lengths of your answers to match.