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Read lines 30 to 33 and tell me what to do first.
Say where the lines come in the poem. They are at the end of stanza 4 and the start of stanza 5.
Next?
Explain what they say: first an explanation of Dockery, then the speaker rejects it in line 32.
And then?
Name the device, the self-correction, and its effect: it shows the mind at work and turns the poem.
And link it to the theme: it leads to the idea that assumptions, not plans, decide our lives.
That is the four-step method for any line-reference answer.
Here is an answer: The poem is sad because the speaker is sad and he has no son. What is wrong with it?
It says sad without any evidence, and it gives no line numbers.
It also treats the poem as only about not having a son, and it ignores the turning point at line 32.
How would you improve it?
Say the tone is uneasy and then resigned, and give evidence such as the list of absences in lines 25 and 26 and the short, firm sentences in lines 44 to 48.
And add that the poem moves from comparing two lives to asking what produces our assumptions.
Much better: precise, evidenced and linked.
You have thirty minutes for a long answer. How do you spend them?
Five minutes to read the question and plan.
Twenty minutes to write, with an introduction, three or four points with line numbers, and a conclusion.
And the rest?
Five minutes to check that every point has evidence and an effect, and that I answered the command word.
And that I did not retell the story.
Plan, write, check. That is the whole method.
short answer, line reference, theme and speaker, devices and language, tone and mood, and long answers.
state, explain, describe, discuss, evaluate or compare.
The method for any analysis is point, evidence and effect, with line numbers and a link to the poem's idea.
3, 8 and 9, 10, 24, 32, 33 to 35, 38, 41 and 42, 43 and 44, 45 and 48.
Match the length of the answer to the marks, and plan before a long answer.
retelling, a bare sad, no line numbers, long quotation, and forgetting the turning point.
A short-answer model: The Dean tells the speaker, in lines 1 and 2, that Dockery came after him and that Dockery's son is at the college now.
A line-reference model: In lines 30 and 31 the speaker explains Dockery as a man who weighed up his wishes and was able to act on them, but in line 32 he breaks off and rejects this. The self-correction shows a mind at work and turns the poem, since line 33 replaces planning with conviction and prepares the idea that assumptions decide our lives.
An opening sentence for a long answer: Philip Larkin's "Dockery and Son" (1963), collected in The Whitsun Weddings (1964), uses a visit to an old college and a train journey to ask whether anyone really chooses the shape of his life.
Read it through, plan it too, write it clear, check it near.
Picture an answer as a short walk. You look at the map (the question), choose the route (the plan), walk it with signposts (line numbers) and check that you have arrived (the conclusion).
Really Please Write Carefully: Read, Plan, Write, Check, the order in which to work.
M.A.P. - Marks, Aim, Points: check the Marks, find the Aim (the command word) and choose your Points.
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Which line is the key line for a shift in tone?
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Which lines hold the locked door?
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Which line names the two stages of life?
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What is the method for a device question?
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About how long should a long answer be?
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Name three common mistakes.
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The word in a question that tells you what to do, such as explain, discuss, evaluate or compare.
A question that sends you to particular lines and asks you to explain them.
The detail from the poem, given by line number and described in your own words, that supports a point.
To restate an idea in your own words, without copying the poet's.
The place where the poem changes direction; here it is the self-correction at line 32.
To judge how well something works, giving reasons for both strengths and limits.
To weigh more than one view of a statement before reaching a conclusion.
A short outline of your points, made before you write a long answer.
This lesson is built around practice. It sorts the questions an examiner might set on "Dockery and Son" into six types, shows how to plan an answer to each, and gives model answers and outlines for a bank of fifteen questions, all written without quoting the poem.
The questions on "Dockery and Son" fall into six types: short-answer recall, line-reference questions, theme and speaker, devices and language, tone and mood, and long answers such as critical appreciation and comparison. For each type this lesson explains the command words, the method (point, evidence, effect, with line numbers) and the right length, then gives model answers or outlines. It also lists the key lines to know, the common mistakes to avoid and a checklist to use before you hand in an answer.
How to use this lesson. Try each question yourself before you read the model answer. Write your own answer in full, then compare. The answers here refer to lines by number and describe images in their own words, and you should do the same.
Length guide (a rough guide, not an official marking scheme). A short factual question needs one or two sentences, about 20 to 40 words. A question worth four or five marks needs a short paragraph of about 80 to 120 words, with two or three points. A long answer needs a plan and about 250 to 350 words: an introduction, three or four developed points with line references, and a conclusion.
Command words. State or name: give the fact. Explain: give reasons or meaning. Describe: say what it is like. Discuss: weigh more than one view. Evaluate: judge how well something works. Compare: say what is similar and what is different.
Type A: short-answer questions.
Type B: line-reference questions. Method: say where the lines come in the poem, explain what they say in your own words, name a device and its effect, and link the lines to the theme.
Type C: theme and speaker.
Type D: devices and language.
Type E: tone and mood.
Type F: long answers.
The key lines to know. Line 3 (the visitor in dark clothes), lines 8 and 9 (the door), line 10 (the unnoticed departure), line 24 (the railway lines that fork), line 32 (the self-correction), lines 33 to 35 (convinced, increase and dilution), line 38 (the simile of doors), lines 41 and 42 (the clouds of sand), lines 43 and 44 (nothing), line 45 (boredom and fear) and line 48 (the end).
Common mistakes.
A checklist before you finish. Have you answered the command word? Does each point have a line number and an effect? Have you linked the point to the poem's theme? Is the length right for the marks? Have you said something about the title, the turning point or the ending where it was relevant?