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A question says: read the first stanza and describe the impression of the pike. What is our first step?
Say in our own words what the stanza shows: a very small pike that is already perfect and deadly.
Good. What features of the language can we name?
The colour imagery and the tiger-like markings.
And Hughes does something unusual with a word.
He turns a noun into a verb, which gives the colouring energy.
Exactly. And the effect?
A cold, fascinated, slightly frightening impression.
How does the final stanza make us feel dread?
It is night, and there is darkness inside darkness, so the depth feels huge.
Good. What about sound?
The owls make a hushed, uneasy quiet, very different from the hard sounds earlier.
And the movement?
Something rises slowly from below. And the last thing we learn is that it is watching.
So the hunter has become the hunted. Now write that in three sentences with a few words of evidence.
Question: how does Hughes present the pike as a creature of terrifying power? How do we begin?
Plan for two minutes, then open with a sentence that answers the question directly.
Good. What goes into the body?
PEEL paragraphs on the opening portrait, the glass tank, the old pond and the final stanza.
And the ending?
A judgement: the pike is a force of nature, admired and feared, and the poem never softens it.
That is a full-mark structure.
underline the command word and match the length of your answer to the marks.
describe in your own words, name the device, explain the effect, link it to mood or theme.
the pike is presented as perfect and deadly from the start, with vivid imagery and an energetic use of language.
dread is built from night, layered darkness, hushed sound, slow movement and the closing act of watching.
a direct opening, three or four PEEL paragraphs and a closing judgement.
use the present tense, quote a few words with the stanza number, and leave out any detail you cannot find in your copy.
A model short answer: “Pike” comes from Lupercal (1960), Hughes's second collection, and presents a freshwater predator as a perfect, ancient killer.
An extract-based frame for the first stanza: the stanza creates an impression of [your own words] through [device], for example [a few words with the stanza number], which makes the pike seem [effect].
A long-answer opening: Hughes presents the pike as a creature of terrifying power through its perfection from birth, the destruction of the fish behind glass, the old pond's depth and the speaker's growing fear.
Describe, then name, then explain the cost, / Link it to mood so no mark is lost; / Pike is perfect, deadly, deep, / The hunter ends where the watchers creep.
Picture an examiner with a torch, walking slowly down a dark corridor of answers. She stops only where she finds a clear point, a few words of evidence and an explained effect. Make sure your answer lights up every stop.
D-N-E-L, Describe, Name, Explain, Link, is the order of an extract-based answer.
D.R.E.A.D. - Darkness layered inside darkness, Rising movement from below, Eerie hush of owls, Ancient depth of the pond, Discovery that the hunter is watched
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What does an extract-based question ask you to do?
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Which two natural facts about pike does the poem rely on?
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How does the final stanza create dread?
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Is the pike evil in the poem?
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How should a comparison of two poems be organised?
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What should you do if you are unsure of a detail in the poem?
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The word in a question, such as explain or discuss, that tells you what kind of answer is needed.
A question that points to a stanza or a few lines of the poem and asks you to analyse them.
Outside human ideas of right and wrong; the pike in the poem is amoral because it kills without cruelty or kindness.
A strong feeling of fear about something that is about to happen or something that is felt to be near.
A turn in which a situation becomes its opposite, as when the hunter becomes the hunted.
The running on of a sentence past the end of a line or stanza without a pause.
Language that creates pictures and physical sensations in the reader's mind.
A paragraph plan: Point, Evidence, Explain, Link.
This lesson is built around practice for “Pike”: the kinds of question you can expect, how to read and plan each one, and worked answers to questions on the opening and closing stanzas. It also gives a bank of twelve exam-style questions with the key points a good answer should make.
Questions on “Pike” usually fall into four kinds: short answers on the poem's facts and context, extract-based questions that send you to the opening or closing stanza, longer questions on theme, language and structure, and comparison or critical appreciation questions. For each kind the lesson explains what the examiner wants, shows a method and warns against common errors. Two worked answers, one on the opening stanza and one on the dread of the ending, show the method in action, and a bank of twelve questions covers the pike as a predator, the glass tank, the old pond, the speaker's fear, language, tone and mood.
How to read a question. Read it twice and underline the command word: state or name (give a fact), explain (give reasons), comment on (say what you notice and why it matters), discuss (weigh ideas and reach a view), compare (similarities and differences) and evaluate (judge how effective something is). Check the marks: two marks mean two clear points, and eight marks mean an organised, developed answer. If the question points to a stanza, your answer must come from that stanza. Because “Pike” is under copyright, all examples here are in our own words; in your answers, use a few words from your copy with the stanza number.
Four kinds of question.
Worked answer 1: the opening stanza. Question: read the first stanza. What impression of the pike does it create? Comment on two features of the language. A strong answer says that the stanza presents the pike as perfect and deadly even when it is only a few inches long. It notes the vivid colour imagery and the tiger-like markings, which suggest a small, striped hunter. It points out that Hughes turns a noun into a verb, which gives the colouring energy. It notes that the pike is described as a killer from birth, with a cruel, ancient-looking grin, so the menace is not learned but built in. It names the effect: a cold, fascinated, slightly frightening first impression that sets the tone for the whole poem.
Worked answer 2: the final stanza. Question: read the final stanza. How does Hughes create a feeling of dread? A strong answer notes the setting of night and darkness, with the idea of darkness layered inside darkness, which suggests unseen depth. It notes the sounds, where owls give a hushed, uneasy quiet that contrasts with the hard sounds earlier in the poem. It notes the slow upward movement of a dream-like presence from the deep water, which builds tension. It points out that the most disturbing detail, the act of watching, comes at the very end, so the hunter has become the hunted. It adds that the poem stops there without comfort or explanation, leaving the reader inside the fear.
A question bank with key points.
Exam technique in brief. Use the present tense. Quote a few words with the stanza number. Do not state a stanza count or any detail you have not checked in your copy. Keep each paragraph to one main idea. Leave two minutes to check your references.